The way the text was organized really drew the readers attention to the main message of the presentation. I feel she used the pictures well at the beginning to show the tone of the movie. Overall, it effectively conveyed the central message of the film and used sources to support. J and J
You talk a bit too much about the central idea of the movie, and not enough about the details. The viewer isn't sure what else happens in the movie other than the central message. The presentation gets a little long, and the viewer begins to lose focus towards the end. The information is great though. Good job.
A lot of good information. More pictures could have been used but your use of different font sizes really proved a point about what you were saying. For a topic that is not well known, you did a good job describing what happened. Good Job!
Disregard Matt's comment... You clearly understood the central message and added good insight to the film. Adding more pictures would have made your presentation a bit stronger. Good job!!
There was awkward wording on slides 22 and 23 and the end of the presentation could of used more visuals. But the Metaphor with the dirty room was a good way to help the reader understand the films message. The change in the texts position also made it more engaging to read. Also you need to explain the meaning of perestroika. Not everyone speaks Russian. You also need to be more assertive with your link to your presentation. "Click here to see it?" Leaves questions to be answered.
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ReplyDeleteThe way the text was organized really drew the readers attention to the main message of the presentation. I feel she used the pictures well at the beginning to show the tone of the movie. Overall, it effectively conveyed the central message of the film and used sources to support.
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ReplyDeleteGood job with everything. Creatively done.
Formatting of images makes message very clear. And your font was just fine!
You talk a bit too much about the central idea of the movie, and not enough about the details. The viewer isn't sure what else happens in the movie other than the central message. The presentation gets a little long, and the viewer begins to lose focus towards the end. The information is great though. Good job.
ReplyDeleteA lot of good information. More pictures could have been used but your use of different font sizes really proved a point about what you were saying. For a topic that is not well known, you did a good job describing what happened. Good Job!
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Disregard Matt's comment... You clearly understood the central message and added good insight to the film. Adding more pictures would have made your presentation a bit stronger. Good job!!
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There was awkward wording on slides 22 and 23 and the end of the presentation could of used more visuals. But the Metaphor with the dirty room was a good way to help the reader understand the films message. The change in the texts position also made it more engaging to read. Also you need to explain the meaning of perestroika. Not everyone speaks Russian.
ReplyDeleteYou also need to be more assertive with your link to your presentation. "Click here to see it?" Leaves questions to be answered.